The environment we live in is in danger. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?
The effects of environmental problems, which is always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of underlying causes, has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on environment over the years. It can be said that there are a myriad of problems for polluting the environment. This essay will elaborate the problems and causes and how it can be reduced and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons for living in harmful atmosphere, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that motorized vehicles are destroying the beauty of the nature as well as increasing health risk by pollution. Moreover, deforestation is increasing which is also a cause of many problems. For example, research showed data on pollution which reveals that because of pollution people are getting dangerous disease due to climate change. Thus, there are many problems in the environment which is detrimental for human existence.
Approaches to deal with the setbacks originated by environmental problems are innumerable but the most effective one is that government should make strict policies to reduce harmful effects on surroundings and it is also responsibility of every individual to clean environment and less use of plastics and more usage of recycle products and keep environment safe and livable place for human as well as animals. For example, in Russian people are contributing to improve the air quality by using more public transport by decreasing personal vehicles usage. So, everybody should participate to reduce harmful emissions and make more livable place for existence.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of dangerous environment on human and animals or plants is prominent, and the solution can be used to improve the atmosphere should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
... years. It can be said that there are a myriad of problems for polluting the environme...
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Line 5, column 541, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vehicles'' or 'vehicle's'?
Suggestion: vehicles'; vehicle's
...public transport by decreasing personal vehicles usage. So, everybody should participate...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33779264214 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01816441742 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.0797498533 50.4703680194 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142862429566 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465685280402 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410689095807 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824725439946 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235830450284 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.