Recently the phenomenon of the environmental problems and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. While some people say that the government should take the responsibility, I sanguinely believe that every person needs to contribute. This essay will further discuss the reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, our environment is at serious risk due to the several issues, such as excessive traffic on the road, which causes air pollution. Another problem is of the dirty water from the factories going into the rivers and polluting the water resources. There are several other reasons for environmental issues. If we talk about the underlying causes for it, There are several causes, but one of the most compelling reasons is the relaxed rules and the lake of awareness among the people.
Furthermore, to fix this problem, government and private organizations need to take the lead. Whereas the government needs to create firm policies, on the other hand, private organizations need to follow them strictly. Moreover, apart from the government, Individuals also needs a play their part to spread awareness among the masses.
To conclude, it is irrefutable to say that there is an environmental problem which need a serious fix and of which underlying cause is the unfavourable laws. Although the government needs to play a significant role to fix this mess, yet every person of the society needs to play their role honestly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iety needs to play their role honestly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, honestly, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2125 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93162533134 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8722976463 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.25 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117120166785 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402416033125 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521574823638 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066320281757 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466266431188 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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