Extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc. are dangerous and should these be banned
The importance of whether dangerous activity is banned or not which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. In my opinion, the former preposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate the negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that many people doing some dangerous activity and earn money and fame. Moreover, they put precious life in risk for doing dangerous activity. Furthermore, these activity such as skiing, water rafting and many more. Furthermore, some people are very poor and they have no job to earning money and then they can choose this dangerous activity and earn money.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more demerits but one of the crucial effect is that some people do those activity for passion and they also lead to fatal injuries and permanent disabilities. Additionally, many people seeing this activity and also gives a lot of money to the risk taker. In addition to, sportsman set record which can not broken easily. Furthermore, government should banned this activity.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion the drawbacks of dangerous activity are indeed too bad to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... opinion, the former preposition appears to be more rational. This essay will fur...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'these activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; these activities
... doing dangerous activity. Furthermore, these activity such as skiing, water rafting and many ...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as skiing, water rafting and many more. Furthermore, some people are very poor and they hav...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'those activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; those activities
...e crucial effect is that some people do those activity for passion and they also lead to fatal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21304347826 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70671293196 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.794103353 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9166666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103502546029 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479295302605 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525249157371 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599453906397 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235593262883 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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