finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

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finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finishing
finishing high school and starting university stu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.5418719212 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 20.9802955665 5% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 31.9359605911 3% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 119.0 1207.87684729 10% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 20.0 242.827586207 8% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.11474252688 3.92707691288 54% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 3.03108891325 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 19.0 139.433497537 14% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.95 0.580463131201 164% => OK
syllable_count: 35.1 379.143842365 9% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6551724138 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.5024630542 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.5 50.4703680194 25% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.5 104.977214359 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0 20.9669160288 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.25397266985 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 1.0 0.242375264174 413% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.579579450369 0.0925447433944 626% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096899789719 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.579579450369 0.151781067708 382% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096899789719 0.0609392437508 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.6 10.9458128079 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.75 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 7.0 55.0591133005 13% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.3980295567 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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