Getting marriage before study is foolish or not ?
The importance of getting merried, which was always debatable, has now become controversial. The substanial influence of wedding has sparked the controversry over the potential impact of this trend on students in recent years. It can be argued that doing marriage before completed their study is not benefited for students.While other think that it is a good dicision for the couple . This essay will elaborates how it is foolish decision and how it is benificial and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reason to say that, why doing marriage at the early age is not good for the human, but the most conspicuos one stems from the fact that an individual has to take more responsibilities toward his family and he would not able to focus on his study.For example, if a person doing marriage at the early age then he cannot manage his professional life as well as personal life at the same time and he has chances of divorce.
However, this topic has a penned issue associated with it that has vast influence. The probable impact of getting married remains the same nonetheless the soundest one is accompanying the fact that doing marrige before the study is benefited for the spouse because she would be helping him in some situation. For instance,if an individual studied in abroad then individual will have a support of his wife to face any problem regarding home-sickness, aloneness and much more.
In conclusion, after looking both sides of the argument, my opinion is on par with the idea that getting married prior to the study is benefited , but it has hard to manage the responsibilities associated with.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eir study is not benefited for students.While other think that it is a good dicision ...
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...hat it is a good dicision for the couple . This essay will elaborates how it is fo...
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...cision for the couple . This essay will elaborates how it is foolish decision and how it i...
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...he would not able to focus on his study.For example, if a person doing marriage at ...
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...undest one is accompanying the fact that doing marrige before the study is benefi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nonetheless, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88612099644 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88113522835 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.027017288 50.4703680194 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.555555556 104.977214359 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.9669160288 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1111111111 7.25397266985 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223436262806 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762163130619 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610923398065 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124414824012 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554833662902 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.