Global warming is a major concern for governments all around the world. What should we do?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about global climate change. While it is possible to claim that climate change has a serious effect around the globe, my view is that it is the responsibility of government , corporation and every individuals to take initiative with regard to prevent it. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument and lead to the plausible conclusion.
There are several reasons how global climate change is a serious issue, like greenhouse effect and it is the responsibility to take action to prevent this change. it is the duty of every individual and government to take step with regard to it. Two of the biggest threats of the environment are air pollution and waste.Air pollution from factories and industries leads to pollute air as well as surrounding environment and hence, global warming, which may have devastating effect on the planet in the future. The emission of fossil fuels and chemicals are main reason for the global warming.
Government could certainly take more steps to reduce air pollution. They should introduce laws to limit emissions from factories and force industries to use renewable sources of energy.
People should be encouraged to use public transport and less of their own vehicles. there should be proper disposal facilities for the factories and industries of their wastes.
As per the aforementioned arguments, we can conclude that government should take steps to control pollution which leads to global warming as well as individual must take care of it .
In my opinion, firstly it is the duty of every individual to take steps to stop pollution from spreading and government also plays an important role, as without the help of government it would not be possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, may, so, well, while, as well as, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10472972973 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81589216457 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6441060569 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16078035298 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598224426929 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417625890046 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873761606695 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394291793068 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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