High schools are giving more and more time to traditional subjects as compared to subjects like computer skills and information technology. Due to this, high school pass outs do not get jobs. Do you think that schools should give more consideration to computers and other advanced subjects?
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or obse
background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">There is no denying that, change is law of nature but after some time of period everything transform in another way. In academic carrier, most of the schools only concentrate on traditional subjects instead of other subjects. I partially agree with this notion and put my views along with rason in upcoming paragraphs.
background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">There is no denying that, change is law of nature but after some time of period everything transform in another way. In academic carrier, most of the schools only concentrate on traditional subjects instead of other subjects. I partially agree with this notion and put my views along with rason in upcoming paragraphs.
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background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">From the prospective of proponents, it is good for children to connect with tradition because from them they can learn more things which they can not learn from today's life and became knowledgable to background of every religions. For example, in schools child can learn the tradition dance and singing but in present time most of the peers are busy with their work so they can not provide the things from which they can learn about tradition.
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background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">In the side of opponents, it is crucial part of study to learn the compared skills like computer and information technology. this era is competion era where everything happens to win the cat and rat race. however, connect with tradition is not bad but we can not overlook the important subjects because the lack of knowledge in this world no one can survive. To illustrate, one who know everything about the tradition and culural value can not get the respective job in industrial area. apart from it, i agree with the statement due to focus on only tradition subjects did not get jobs beause they lack in knowledge of advance technology.
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background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">the conclusion can be incapsulated in one statement is that
background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">From the prospective of proponents, it is good for children to connect with tradition because from them they can learn more things which they can not learn from today's life and became knowledgable to background of every religions. For example, in schools child can learn the tradition dance and singing but in present time most of the peers are busy with their work so they can not provide the things from which they can learn about tradition.
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background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">In the side of opponents, it is crucial part of study to learn the compared skills like computer and information technology. this era is competion era where everything happens to win the cat and rat race. however, connect with tradition is not bad but we can not overlook the important subjects because the lack of knowledge in this world no one can survive. To illustrate, one who know everything about the tradition and culural value can not get the respective job in industrial area. apart from it, i agree with the statement due to focus on only tradition subjects did not get jobs beause they lack in knowledge of advance technology.
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background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">the conclusion can be incapsulated in one statement is that
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- High schools are giving more and more time to traditional subjects as compared to subjects like computer skills and information technology. Due to this, high school pass outs do not get jobs. Do you think that schools should give more consideration to com 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 6.10837438424 295% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 20.9802955665 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 31.9359605911 276% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 22.0 5.75862068966 382% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3549.0 1207.87684729 294% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 603.0 242.827586207 248% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8855721393 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9554069778 3.92707691288 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.0463906231 2.71678728327 186% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.248756218905 0.580463131201 43% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 925.2 379.143842365 244% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 3.65517241379 328% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6551724138 166% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.509746969 50.4703680194 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.0 104.977214359 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 20.9669160288 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0798415157213 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499209921214 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412965440197 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392022470345 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465539087251 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 12.6369458128 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.32886699507 78% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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