human life. Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may have devastating effects on animals and Discuss.
Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may have devastating effects on animal and human life. Discuss.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals destruction of rain forests is a dangerous problems and it has detrimental impact on the human life as well as animals. I think it is caused by different activities and I will discuss reasons in further elaborating paragraphs.
To commence with, deforestation is a serious problem which lead to bad impact on animals and human. Firstly, people cut down the trees day by day for the purpose of construction of buildings and other materials. Many plants species and animals are disappearing and there are greatly impact on the life cycle of animals. Moreover, enormous animals exit because their native habitats disappear due to logging of the trees. For example, panda animal had exist because eliminate their habitat.
In addition to it, global warming are increasing day by day which has bad effects on human health whereas it cause different diseases like skin burning, cancer and so on. Masses are suffering from harmful diseases. Furthermore, the ecological balance always disturbed due to depletion of plants and trees. Forests are beneficial for the observing harmful chemicals and release oxygen for survive their life but due to construction of it the amount of dangerous gasses has increased.
To conclude, destruction of forests eliminates the habitat for the wildlife and depletion the life cycle of human. Government and individual should take perfect step to eliminate this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23983739837 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82153941525 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9911737956 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0714285714 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252965817613 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721673474748 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686466717537 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136370225102 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491612646777 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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