The importance of cars and airplane in modern life. Give example.
The importance of cars and airplane in modern life was always a debatable topic. Many people believe that modern ways of transport system saves time and give privacy. It is completely agreed that the effective way of modern transportation makes human life much easier. This essay would further elaborate the reasons why cars and aero planes are very important in present world with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, travelling in cars give us privacy and majority of population around globe consider car as best way to reach destination. With increase in the development and technology advancement in present era many features are added in cars that makes our commute very easy and comfort. Moreover, if person owns a car, he or she can travel anywhere anytime instead of planning before and booking tickets for public and private services such as bus, train and other vehicles. For example, people living in cities can travel to workplace easily and can reach on time and for cities where the temperatures are extreme cold or hot, cars are the best mode of travel. This example clearly exemplifies us that cars provide us individual privacy and space.
Furthermore, aero planes are considered as other best opted way of travelling to long distance. Travelling in aero planes has numerous benefits. It helps us to reach our destination within short period of time compared to other transportation ways, saves time and importantly for any emergency aero planes are the best suited mode of travel. For example, employees working in corporate offices can travel to other branches within short period of notice to attend Business meetings.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that cars and aero planes are the great innovations in modern world to make people travel longer distance within less effort and providing individual space to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 313.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15335463259 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6908356537 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.257365113 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26225661759 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097182802046 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111283566019 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158684178761 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126391075135 0.0609392437508 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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