The importance of traveling for education is greatly overrated. In modern days, you can still be a brilliant scholar without going outdoors. To what extent do you agree?
These days, there is a controversial debate among people about the importance of traveling for education. There are a great number of people who interpret the impacts of traveling for education as thoroughly constructive, while other hold an opponent's view.
I am inclined to believe that traveling for education is beneficial and should be promoted.
There are several reasons why going outdoors for education is advantageous. First of all, it is argued that traveling for education play a pivotal role in creating adroit people, this is attributed to the fact that such programs could relive the stress of dents to find sufficient career, therefore they would create a feeling of accomplishment and competence, which consequently open avenues to new achievements so youngsters enthusiasm and
determination will be amplified toward many daunting tasks. MBA courses for example, even intelligence student have to do uphill struggle to solve problems.
In additions, it is claimed that some measures can be taken by governments to stimulate college students to prioritize their education than career, this is to say that it could foster a great sense of humanity and enhance welfare and student could perform up to expectation in the society. Specifically, a research study conducted in Yale university in 2015 has found that traveling for education could enhance person 's intellectual abilities to make decision related to personal and social life.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propound the view that traveling for education enhance effectiveness and efficiency of student 's evaluation and increase their confidence. It is expected that governments take cognizance of these facts and began to adopt this way of planning in universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...tly open avenues to new achievements so youngsters enthusiasm and determination will be a...
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...udy conducted in Yale university in 2015 has found that traveling for education c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49815498155 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1428154977 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.365751087 50.4703680194 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.0 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208380768091 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882286925695 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434919137024 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107272569703 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389794495088 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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