Information revolution has changed the ways of mass communication and has some negative and positive effects on individual’s lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal change in the ways of mass communication thanks to the ubiquity of the state-of-the-art technology. There is a widespread worry that this would only lead to a myriad of concerns in society. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that by utilising such advanced communication tools as Facebook, e-newspapers, now media can reach a much broader range of consumers, as they no longer have to rely on conventional newspapers and magazines. In addition to that, with the rapid increase of the internet and internet-enabled devices like smartphones, not only can people check their emails and send messages, but they can also communicate or engage in a face to face conference with anyone around the globe, even when they are on the move. Needless to say, all these merits stand people in a good stead, as far as broadening their horizons is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that as the people can easily access to information on any kind of topic just click on a button, and also it saves their time significantly. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of the new changes in mass communication.
In the view of the above arguments, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of modern communication in today’s mass media are too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93253968254 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13783017483 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7108540176 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118283276617 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448634706641 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505652141462 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804024696221 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401959244933 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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