It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. Agree or not?
some people believe that getting married before completing a professional career can be seen as a foolish idea because people should be prepare to compite in society. this essay will outline some reasons to explain why it is important to settle down professional lives before engaging with other commitments.
this modern world demands individuals to be well-prepared to succeed in life and this coud be only achieved if people develop a skill attending to university to secure an excellent employment opportunity. For example, it is crucial that young people can study a carrer to be employable or to aspire new job opportunities because there are others who are already developing a skill to secure a prosperous life; therefore, before thinking to get married have a carrer is indispensable these days.
Moreover, previous generations have surivived with skills that were transmitted by their ancestors. However, this society requires people to have a profession to secure an employment. So, married before completing a carrer may represent a barrier for young people because they may have more responsibilities and other commitments to attend that finishing a carrer can be left as a second option. Hence, develop a skill is higly relevant in this society.
To sum up, it is clear that engaging in a serious responsibility as getting married can have negative effect not only for individuals but also for their future lives because they may not be able to offer economic estability for their families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2304526749 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01439135379 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3924004543 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.222222222 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17529862641 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663561618276 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684414659589 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109135896324 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752987472294 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.