Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities and towns In your own experience is it a positive development

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Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities and towns. In your own experience, is it a positive development?

Malls are an ambient new way of shopping and have a high worldwide quality shopping experience. Large shopping malls are a charismatic luxury although there are local shops in cities and towns, for it is a phenomenon everyone admires along with enjoying. In my opinion, malls have become a daily necessity for all of us.

Firstly, the shopping malls offer a one-stop solution for the consumers since there are many departmental stores with hypermarkets facility providing the many necessities, so we may have all types of customers with different income groups for the cherishing the moment acquiring the benefit of the environmental high-quality concern. For instance, there are multinational concerns like Lifestyle, DLF and many more global companies making an impact over the consumers, for I believe they have many parameters and dimensions of global calibre while it is in a world-class infrastructure.

On the other side, they help to pertain vivid and diverse variety of the products and services provided at the largest economic and most affordable price which is eventually really high quality and low price, for there are more facilities like the mall premises have restaurants and play areas for the kids to enjoy. For example, there is Ambiance mall in the Delhi outskirts offering a great global shopping experience while the customers really enjoy in thousands they can come, and I surely think they enjoy in a happening way.

In conclusion, if we will continue to have a worldwide development with a happy go loving experience of such premises, we shall continue to have a better future of the economic and social capacity for the global development days to see.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a happening way" with adverb for "happening"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...can come, and I surely think they enjoy in a happening way. In conclusion, if we will continue ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, really, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17518248175 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89365198355 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6573218223 50.4703680194 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.25 104.977214359 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 20.9669160288 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.375 7.25397266985 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178189989477 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100263362055 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956005026616 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120843935276 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102681362962 0.0609392437508 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 53.1260098522 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.9458128079 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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