Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
In contemporary society, the controversial issue of shopping malls taking over small shops has aroused widespread attention. Many people hold the view that it is promising progress in terms of modernization. However, others are backing the idea that such replacement is posing an imbalance in the local economy. Personally speaking, I tend to agree with the former because I see numerous advantages of this change, which will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, the emergence of shopping mall brings great convenience to our daily life. Since all kinds of merchandise for our daily needs is placed under one roof, people can complete their shopping at one stop. Besides, the fixed price across the mall saves us the time for the endless bargaining. That being said, shopping at a shopping mall is more time-efficient, which is a huge advantage compared to wondering in the scattered stores.
Moreover, customers can get quality items from the shopping malls at a lower price. since the cost for transportation and storage in larger stores is shared thanks to the distribution in bulk, the same merchandises at shopping malls are often considerably cheaper. Taking my own experience as an example, the milk that I get from the well-known Australian chain supermarket Woolworth is almost always 1 to 2 dollars less expensive than the one that I get from the local grocery shop. As a result, these financial benefits can be another reason for shoppers to choose malls over small shops.
Shortly put, although small shops have their unique values in the market, shopping malls bring people more advantages than the inconvenience. I am firmly convinced that having more shopping malls is a positive change rather than a negative one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14736842105 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84202728938 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9696441589 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231184032862 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809133843803 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476966062304 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142901486559 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030389726244 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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