In our modern society, mass media plays a significant role in shaping up people's characters and opinions. Mass media includes newspapers, television, internet and so forth. Experts believe that the mass media creates and reflects culture. I firmly assert that mass media plays a vital role in shaping up people's characters and opinions. This essay will discuss how mass media influence people's ideas and attitudes.
There are several reasons why mass media is considered vital in our day-to-day life. Firstly, it helps in fast and instant messaging and provides the ability to connect to the people all over the world. Secondly, Mass media such as advertising helps the business owners to promote their products, and it can spur the business. Finally, as mass media available to everyone, it can spread the news instantly. Political organizations use the social media as a tool to communicate with their supporters.
Moreover, the impact of mass media is prominent in communicating and progressing our society. For instance, former American President used social media for their election campaign which yielded a good result.
This essay discussed mass media's influence on our society, and how it characterizes our opinion. Mass media transformed the way we communicate in the recent years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37254901961 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81620100162 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.5279711325 50.4703680194 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2857142857 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0522214348029 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234048560437 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283647541969 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0335981817349 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167386274335 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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