In many countries, people are suffering due to poor health. Discuss the unhealthy lifestyle of people and how medical institutions can solve these issues
It is indubitable that the modern lifestyle has played a detrimental effect on our health and has attracted many controversies. I firmly believe that people nowadays are falling prey to the consequences of following these unhealthy norms. This essay will further look into this problem and will suggest some solutions to alleviate this soaring concern.
To begin with, there are various potential causes behind the unhealthy and carefree attitude of the people. Fisrtly, the world has now witnessed the phenomenon of cutting edge competitions where people do not have time to find right food for themselves. For this reason, they switch to junk foods and eat and drink gluttonously. Moreover, the hectic work life and daily long commutations leaves no time for their physical activity. All in all, it is apparent that modern life has made people sedentary and couch potatoes.
However, the setbacks originated by this unhealthy lifestyle can be dealt through the government intervention in conducting self-discipline sessions that can guide in eating right and following a diet and fitness regime. Furthermore, medical institutes can organize free and regular body check-ups to educate people about their health. Lastly, medical and local authorities must ensure to educate about the importance of balanced diet and nutrition for children and infants.
In view of above mentioned facts, it seems to me that the deleterious effects of poor health due to changes in lifestyle in people cannot be overlooked and therefore, can be reduced by engaging into regular physical exercise and encouraging the value of nutrition in daily diets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the value of nutrition in daily diets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38910505837 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85299194736 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8223869867 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253164611024 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786773923642 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068875873419 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139269003072 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439191172569 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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