Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.
Many people believe regions play pivotal roles to successful persons it teaches to be a better human. In my opinion native regions and the regions where they belong to equally plays important role in person life. This essay will shed a light on both regions and draw a conclusion.
On the first hand, a native region is a place where people learn values of life with their friends and family. They develop attitude, culture, and discipline which are key factors to be a successful person. If their surrounding has no good culture and discipline it will directly affect in teenager behavior. Young teenagers are always curious and grow seeing their elders and they will try to follow the same footsteps. Therefore, native region definitely contributes many factors to be a successful person.
On the other hands, the regions where people belong also plays a great role. It will bring new opportunities and diverse cultures. The things they learned in childhood from their native region can be improved more and help to find their path. However, if they are in bad society it will affect their future. They can get involve in crime, drug, and gambling.
Overall, native regions the regions where the people belong to really affect person's future to be successful as they teach them culture, tradition, and values of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...culture and discipline it will directly affect in teenager behavior. Young teenagers are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98648648649 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45131559317 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4290048512 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0714285714 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364468071892 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141833727153 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127894358688 0.071462118173 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275691420513 0.151781067708 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103011301487 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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