Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to ?
Native region are where people are born and bought-up. Depending upon the region they belong to, their behaviour, thought process, attitude, approach differ. Still to be a winner, you dont have to depend upon region or the region doesn't play a vital role in anyone's career aspirations. This essay discuss about that regions are just a minor part and start-up point in one's life.
Though one start their initial stage of life in a particular region and have a passion towards career which have less scope, still they doesn't fail in suceeding their life. A person's passion, attitude, skill, interests vary for region. Yet they keep going towards their target in achieving goals. Not all successors are from their own native region. For example, Barak Obama, Sachin Tendulkar, Suresh Raina are few people who relocated in order to taste the success. In many cases, our native region may not have much facilities too impovise our skills. But people are aware of reaching correct place from where they can reach top of the ladder.
Secondly, suceeding from our motherland would be delifinitely grateful since a person can share the happiness and joy amongst their friends and family. Being in a circle where people would encourage us and share positive thought will be a boast in an individual's travel. In addition, succedding from our native region also gives pride to our nerighbours and encourages other people as well.
To comclude, a region cannot influence people's success but many other attribues does.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07630522088 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4062693983 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.134765595 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2666666667 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350827508973 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129346592556 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792178211675 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235036883635 0.151781067708 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833007066447 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.