Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
In this rapidly growing world, achieving their goal is everyone's dream. But some of the people only reached their desire not all the human. Because it depends upon how the hard work is done for it?. But some people have an opinion, it’s all happened only because of the native region. I discuss my both opinions in the following paragraphs.
The region is the important thing for a person’s victory because regions will create an environment to achieve their goal and it has a great influence on that. For instance, by born Steve jobs is an American. After the invention of the Apple Phone by Steve jobs, he became more popular first in America than all over the world. Because of his region people, those who are living in that region encourage him by buying apple phones.so the reason for his popularity and entrepreneurship is also by the region.
On the other hand, getting accomplished is depending on the person's brain, hard work and attitude towards the goal. Because victory is the byproduct of hard work so it doesn’t depend on backgrounds like country, language, and region. For example, Dr.APJ.Abdul Kalam was a great scientist and erstwhile president of India who is from one of the rural places in Tamilnadu and he is the role model for every youngster in India till now. How he attains this stage is only because of his knowledge and hard work.
In conclusion according to my analysis from both sides, my opinion falls into the line that, the region is not the deciding factor for the success of a person. Alacrity and involvement only play an important role in all successful people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8381294964 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6330173555 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4507463938 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216662598634 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709962277134 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825569064676 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136953636691 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520136080928 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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