The life expectancy of people has drastically elevated due to the advancement in the medical field which has sparked the heated contentious argument among the certain group of individuals. Many people consider this as the greatest achievement but there are many who are against it. I firmly believe this is an added advantage and I will elaborate points to support my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, to begin with, In the era of advanced technologies, inventions and discoveries have brought the revolution in the industry of medical science. Earlier, where people died even from ailments such as Dengue and Fever, now, have the cure for dreadful diseases like Cancer and Heart Attacks which has increased an average age of people. Throughout life, humans struggle to make their life perfect and work to stabilize their career. At the time, they understand the fact that this is not the only precious thing in life and peace, tranquil and serene is moreover achieved by helping others, they die. With the average increase in age, people have started giving more to society and contributing their time and money to develop and nurture the society and nation.
In addition to this, they are helping hands in extending their support in raising their grandchildren and passing these values, experience and ethics to them. Children are the future of any nation and more responsible and ethical they would be, the better are the chances of harmony and prosperity.
In contrary to this, there are people who believe that there are many pitfalls with the improvement in their life expectancy. With the average increase in their age, they become more financially dependent on their families for their regular health checkups and visits to hospitals. In addition to this, they don’t perform any work for a country in terms of prosperity and enjoy the government provided financial help for the seniors which leads in depleting of financial resources.
In conclusion, raise in an average age of people has a positive impact and its far outweigh the curse. Elderly help in maintaining the society, culture and tradition of the society and nation and I wholeheartedly believe that their shadows and support are well required for the nurture and growth of children and society overall.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 8.36945812808 311% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1207.87684729 160% => OK
No of words: 375.0 242.827586207 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14666666667 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 3.92707691288 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67578972766 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 379.143842365 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4790852282 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971857726543 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356439492753 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439777392692 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472136136621 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045717492428 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 55.0591133005 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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