Nowaday, it is very common for modern technology to appear in most of the work places. everybody often said that depending on these divices brings more benifits for almost all of aspects of the life. I totally agree with this statement because of several reasons.
To bigin with, nobody can argue interaction among employees is more effective and easier when thay use the internet, the faxes as well as mobile phones. Today, many companies are mostly equipped with those facilities which lead to a better collaboration among workers. These people communicate via email, online network and video confferrencing using different types of computer application such as Skype, Google drive, microsoft outlock and so on. Furthermore, the recent technological divices allow company to organize its files with a better time managerment and low- cost. For instance, the ability to store a large amount of data is so convinient and inexpensive, and save space.
In addition, technology provide tools to take place the routine task like typing and transfering document, therefore, the business activities become more productive. bisides, computers speed up the those activities such as collection of the consumer feedbacks and inspection of productions to carry out a better quality results. It is difficult to inmagine that company run their business without technology which has been emerging as a foundation of production and survice processes in the modern world.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that with the development of technological divices our life is improved not only about works but also about entertainments.I would argue that there is no disadvantages when we base too much on technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everybody
...y to appear in most of the work places. everybody often said that depending on these divi...
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Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
... is more effective and easier when thay use the internet, the faxes as well as mobi...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bisides
...ness activities become more productive. bisides, computers speed up the those activitie...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...out works but also about entertainments.I would argue that there is no disadvanta...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no disadvantages'?
Suggestion: there are no disadvantages
...about entertainments.I would argue that there is no disadvantages when we base too much on technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37969924812 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99188842506 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68045112782 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3935721098 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154825241853 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580141266318 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09307517716 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103248357141 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619406929066 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.