In present-day families, mostly both mothers and fathers are working consequently giving less time to their kids. They are required to work in order to fulfill the increasing requirements of life. Leaving their children alone for long working hours can cause many harms, including damaged relationships between family members and emotional and stress-related problems in children to name but a few.
Nowadays, the cost of raising and supporting a family is so high that both parents are needed to work to survive financially. Many daily use products have turned out to be so expensive; this requires both parents to work hard to fulfill the basic needs of their family members like schooling, medicine, food requirement. A recent survey, conducted in Australia, has shown that in 93 percent of the families both parents are working to meet the increasing prices of products. Therefore, to cover all financial needs of a family both parents are required to do work.
Since both parents go to work so children live alone for the long duration this harms the kids’ personalities and relationship with family members. As parents are spending less time with family this leads to their youngsters towards crimes. A research conducted on the criminal children has shown that 99 percent of these youngsters become offenders because of the home environment. As they live alone and no one takes care of them and they get involved in wrong activities. In short, the working of both parents negatively affects the children and family life.
In conclusion, mothers and fathers both are working these days thus spending less time with youngsters. They both have to work to upkeep their family economically because of inflation. This trend can damage children’s personality and family relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...problems in children to name but a few. Nowadays, the cost of raising and suppor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88661769696 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7741401192 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418924911221 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153008878049 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08907412347 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279794692837 0.151781067708 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517095088616 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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