Both job and money is considered as an essential for the parents to survive in their lives, so they totally spend their precious time on jobs rather than to spend more time with their offsprings, due to this, their children do not easily understand the importance of values in their life which related to the society and ethical concepts.
To commence with, a large number of parents are contributing doing a race, especially to ameliorate their financial status.As, the progenitors are facing regularly the obstacles which mainly related to the inflation criteria. Eventually, they earn more money which make them able to improve the status of their offsprings. For instance, a survey was conducted by the researchers which showed, not only father but also mother was putting a lot of efforts to do work together, because they only wanted to change their earlier surroundings and make their life more easier.
However, despite of its reasons, there are numerous sobering problems arising due to the working time of parents. As, during this time, their offsprings can not get thorough insights into the definition of relationship, because they just only able to utilize their time alone, especially by using electronic gadgets such as television and mobile phones as along with enormous obstacles related to trust can be arised between the relationship of parents and children. For example, it is mostly seen that the teenagers are indulging in bad activities by using the smart phones, because they are not properly receiving the shelter of the parents.
To conclude, the progenitors are played an indispensable part in their offsprings' life. Although, it is very essential for the parents to do more work, but still they should have to abbreviate their working time, because their children's life can not be ameliorated only through money together with love of parents is also required.
- The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how there causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak 56
- the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011 56
- the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011 56
- In today s society both Western medicine and traditional complementary forms of medicines are now widely known and used The effectiveness of these kinds of treatment is determined by the patient s mental attitude towards it To what extent you agree or dis 83
- Topic: The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ethical concepts. To commence with, a large number of parents are contributing doing a race, ...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ly to ameliorate their financial status.As, the progenitors are facing regularly t...
^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly to ameliorate their financial status.As, the progenitors are facing regularly t...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...arlier surroundings and make their life more easier. However, despite of its reasons, th...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... due to the working time of parents. As, during this time, their offsprings can n...
^^
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s related to trust can be arised between the relationship of parents and children...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18566775244 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71380665773 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3357142553 50.4703680194 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.888888889 104.977214359 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.9669160288 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265701516582 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109358006904 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735540030099 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179319215394 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585022878672 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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