Nowadays, large shopping centers and supermarkets are more common than small local shops. Is this a negative or positive development?
In today’s era, development is one of the significant factors, which determines any country’s prosperity and growth as a result it can be seen that many large shopping centers and supermarkets have been built for providing more convenient to customers which in turn has made customers do shopping more in such giant complex rather than in local shops. Hence, I am to discuss the positive and negative outcomes which may be associated with this.
To begin with, infrastructure in terms of shopping centers and supermarkets can result in manifold positive changes. Firstly, shopping has become a favorite activity of people, therefore they prefer such places for shopping where they can purchase anythingthing which they need, ranging from groceries to clothing and more, consequently, they do not have to make multiple stops at different stores to get the needful, hence, making shopping extraordinarily convenient. Secondly, these shopping centers make available product of every brand with attractive discounts which one cannot find out in local shops, furthermore, large shopping malls provide all the amenities which customer want such as parking, resting areas and so on, which make people’s experience more exciting, but all these things are absent in local shops. For instance, it has been seen that nowadays people do not want any compromise in their comforts, and thus they prefer to go to these big market places.
On the other hand, every development is accompanied by certain negative things, which is similar in this on account of manifold reasons. Firstly, these shopping centers have become a major cause of downfall in the sales of local shops, which ultimately hit on the livelihood of local shopkeepers, which is utterly erroneous. In addition, local shops are now on the verge of losing their existence and business because of the availability of all products in supermarkets at an economical price, due to which local shopkeepers try to compete with such centers by taking loans in a hefty interest despite that they do not gain profit because of the amenities which are made available by the supermarkets. For instance, it has been seen that people now consider shopping as their symbol of prestige correspondingly, prefer to do shopping in big malls.
In conclusion, I believe that development is necessary for any country in terms of supermarkets but there should not be any kind of impact on local shops, as local shops contribute equally in the development of any nation.
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| 2019-11-02 | kuldeep sharma | 100 | view |
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
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Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
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Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 31.9359605911 191% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1207.87684729 171% => OK
No of words: 395.0 242.827586207 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22278481013 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 3.92707691288 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89199260278 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501265822785 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 379.143842365 168% => OK
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A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.128570766985 0.0925447433944 139% => OK
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Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386882483858 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 12.6369458128 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.9458128079 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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