Nowadays, more and more people engage in dangerous activities, such as sky diving and motorcycling. Are you in favor of them? Use examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, whether participating more and more society members in dangerous activities have attracted numerous controversies and drawn the public's attention. Some people think that sports such as sky diving and motorcycling are favorable activities, while others hold the view that such routines might pose their health condition to numerous risks. In my opinion, engaging in dangerous activities outweighs its drawbacks due to social and psychological reasons.
First and foremost, the social reason is why I think people's engagement in those risky activities. Although potentially negative impacts of engaging in sky diving and motorcycling must be taken into account, I still reckon that the people's engagement has, in many ways, enormously enriched their lives. For example, a well known American athlete once said, 'individuals are generally afraid of chronic diseases due to lack of dangerous activities in their daily life.' it is clearly shown that citizens' well-being might be improved by dangerous sports.
In addition, another factor that should be considered is the psychological reasons. As far as society is concerned, the ultimate aim of dangerous activities is to resolve people's mental problems. For instance, a recent article published by The New York Times reveals that 92% of people feel that their problem-solving skills improved after engaging in skydiving. Undoubtedly, this is a clear indication that such dangerous activities have a positive impact on people's behavior.
In conclusion, I am in favor of participating in more and more dangerous activities. To address this issue, the government and society should make a sound effort to find solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...ed numerous controversies and drawn the publics attention. Some people think that sport...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
.... Some people think that sports such as sky diving and motorcycling are favorable activiti...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ntially negative impacts of engaging in sky diving and motorcycling must be taken into acc...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...n into account, I still reckon that the peoples engagement has, in many ways, enormousl...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ngerous activities in their daily life. it is clearly shown that citizens well-bei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05314707077 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7952021776 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33231045988 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107792313549 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780044521535 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198760760162 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735308082146 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.