Nowadays more and more people engage in dangerous activities such as sky diving and motorcycling Are you in favor of them Use examples to support your opinion

In every era, we have seen so many new changes; whether it's life-changing or life-threatening. People always try the best possibilities to engage themselves in interesting or dangerous activities. Today, I will discuss things such as sky-diving and motorcycling. I may or may not be in favor of these trending activities. I will also give a conclusion on this serious issue.

At the very first beginning, I believe to say that sky-diving and motorcycling both can be adventurous or death stunts. People who are very strong-hearted they would love to try/learn these both activities, which lead to them become an artist and professional with the help of that they can manage their expenses or make these activities as their profession. For instance, people who have gained this experience can easily make anything possible for a better future. Overall, it said to be a controversial statement.

On the contrary side, I can boldly say sometimes these outdoor activities can be life-taking as nobody can predict if sky-diving doesn't have any technical issue. Sometimes performing for motorcycling if u didn't take any healthy precaution that you need to take but you forgot by not wearing gloves, helmets, leather jackets and many other things, you may lose your life in an accident.

In summary, I would say both games have pros and cons. It can be life-changing as well as life taking too. However; every single thing has it's own merits and demerits but can also tell we have more upsides rather than many downsides.

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Average: 6.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...s. Today, I will discuss things such as sky diving and motorcycling. I may or may not be i...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
... first beginning, I believe to say that sky diving and motorcycling both can be adventurou...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...be life taking as nobody can predict if sky diving doesnt have any technical issue. Someti...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ing as nobody can predict if sky diving doesnt have any technical issue. Sometimes per...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...etimes performing for motorcycling if u didnt take any heathly precaution that you ne...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...fe changing as well as life taking too. However; every single thing has its own merits ...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...o tell we have more upsides rather than much downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in summary, such as, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90836653386 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78652151393 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1477984431 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179526568978 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562137559088 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504784014209 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984325496481 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402561798765 0.0609392437508 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 65.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 59.0 Out of 90
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