Social media plays pivotal role in today's competitive world in spreading new sand keep in touch with loved ones. While there are lots of benefits from this trends , there are considerable amount of drawbacks which is addressed accordingly.
On one hand , it is axiomatic to state that, there are rising numbers of positive effects which derived from social media. Firstly, it plays a main role in contacting with our relations, friends and business people. In personal perspective, social media allows teenager to make friends online who share similar interest and also with help of skype a student can contact with her teacher to take lesson with out meeting in study room physically. Further elaborating my view , communication was much more difficult when it was limited to written letters and telegrams , but today this has become simple and quicker due to the development of social media such as skype , viber and other facilities. In business point of view, business people have ability to collaborate online meetings rather than meeting in one place for a one hour meeting and this will be much more productive as well this will save time and money as well. Secondly, social media such as facebook has become the top medium of spreading news among people all over the world within few minutes. Thereby the advantages of social media can been seen clearly.
On the other hand, we should not forget the negative effects of social media. This will be directly heading to isolate real relationships since people give priority to virtual relationships not only that but also social media keep spreading wrong news as a result this will lead to social and personal problem among people.
On conclusion, it is clear that social media has both positive and negative effects while I believe advantages overweight the disadvantages . But still it is important to use these services more wisely .
In today's technological era…
In today's technological era, using social media has increased all around the world as social media play a crucial role to communicate and spread the news. Although utilizing these media can impact on human's relationship and lead to publishing fake news, social media have eradicated international boundaries in communication and help to spread the news all around the world. In my opinion, despite some complications which are there, the correct usage of these gadgets is more beneficial.
The tremendous benefits of using social media are that people from all over the world would be able to keep in touch, and also news will publish worldwide within a few minutes. By progress social media, this opportunity has been provided for people to prevent wasting their time, energy and money by applying social media. For instance, students can take advantage of online study benefits of connecting with international teachers, and in the business point of view, business people can corporate in online meetings instead of meeting in one place for a one-hour session as well as, while this will be much more productive. Furthermore, social media like Facebook, Twitter, Telegram, etc. have become the top media of spreading the news among people all over the world within a few minutes. Hence, social media provides significant advantages for human life.
The decrease of relationships in the real world and the probability of spread fake news are the two main disadvantages of using social media. Expansion of connection in virtual space causes a sharp reduction in physical interaction to connect with family and friends has led to many mental diseases. Besides, because all people have this ability to spread the news in this space, the possibility of spread rumours increase. For example, every day, we observe rumours circulating in cyberspace about artists, politicians and famous persons. Therefore, as always, the use of new technologies has faced challenges, the use of social media is no exception.
The progression of technology has provided new communication ways for people to be in touch throughout the world. While there are some problems with using social media, namely the reduction of social interactions and publish the fake news, people benefit much from social media's advantages like eliminating boundary restriction by providing video call and increase public awareness by publishing the authentic news. It seems that if the culture of proper use of these networks becomes pervasive, the advantages of using social networks would be superior rather than their disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07371794872 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59864587197 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9116701154 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34535254223 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112225716136 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545846633431 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200580067066 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416996575447 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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