Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
The discussion on the television is a debatable one and each side has it's logical arguments. I believe that television has had more negative results on the society than positive. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefit of watching television is news, awareness and geographic channels. For example, the old aged people are using television in paramount manner. The family heads dramatically uses it to know the worldly news. Especially for children, they are keen lovers of cartoon channels.
On the other hand, in spite of these arguments, most of the television programs has negative consequences in various ways. Firstly, the romantic movies in television has spoiled the moral character of the students and makes them, unable to concentrate on their studies. Gradually, the attitudes of the students are got worst in family and social environment. Secondly, the dramas has another programs which vanishing the good behavior of the family girls and make them to unfit for the family member.
Lastly, in my opinion, the most of the television programs are uttered waste for the human beings. So it is not a companion of people unless it acts an evil nowadays.
Taking these points into consideration, from a personal perspective, without a shadow of a doubt, I conclude that most of the programs are spoiling the internal character of youth, young-ones and housewife. It should be properly monitored by the family heads to keep away from unwanted television programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07575757576 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82269921423 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3558774288 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14176051287 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490629898615 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444484770094 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855256746262 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669657244003 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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