Travel to study is over rated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies?
For higher studies, some of them are traveling to abroad even though we have great doctorates who completed their research studies. Truly speaking, we don’t need required to move to other countries for higher education.
Some of the students and parents have their mind set that migrate for postgraduates and undergraduates would be benefited. They do assuming that the quality of university in their country is not sophisticated for the student’s future. Especially, the job market after the graduation would be a questionable one. The companies in their countries would not come for campus interview, even for ranked universities. This would cause a vast change in the student’s career after completing their college.
At that same time, the students who are belongings to middle class, they never taught that they would go for another country for university studies. They are compromising and managing the studies in their own country. They took a role model of great scientist and entrepreneurs who are shining in their home country after the institutions. They are strongly believing and debating that traveling for higher education would never give any splendid performance instead it is a lavish thing. It really depends upon the talents of the individual not schools.
In conclusion, journey for higher studies never makes any change for the people. It is all rely on the brilliant and intellectual of the concern, not universities. So, everyone could learn a lot in their own country.
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| 2019-11-25 | elise1234 | 80 | view |
| 2019-01-25 | manussekhar | 72 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.325 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00128444725 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1474412828 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.2 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.25397266985 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224029724366 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734795951043 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652847453665 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149352917754 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619478951186 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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