Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Art is very essential part in most of the countries in the world. Especially, the ancient symbolic countries are focusing more on the paints of old king's picture, war scene and natural scenes. They are getting more profit in this subject. That's why the rulers of some kingdoms took more interest to improve the advancement of art livings to get financial background. but some people are not supporting this act and want the government to involve in other essential department which improve the status of citizens and backbone of the country.
Nowadays, the human beings are facing poverty, illiterate and security lagging in their home land. But the ruling parties are concentrating more on Arts and in which it gives more money to the politicians not the people.
The bribe and corruption are enormously increased among the politician and it leads to focus only on arts. They reciprocally forget the country people who are suffering from lack of food and shelter. This is ridiculous and unacceptable for those who loved the good things.
The essential part of the human life is food and shelter. The government has to be step forward to think about tremendous improvement of people's life style. The corporation has to look through the basic needs of the people and to get reached all over their country.
Next major need of the citizens are education. The government has to provide free education from lower grade to higher grade schooling. They have to announce scholarship for undergraduate, post graduate and doctorate students. It will increase the economic status of the country and support the government as well.
So the government has to take responsible to allocate the wealth in people's basic need and education, instead of arts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: That's
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Suggestion: But
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...dous improvement of peoples life style. The corporation has to look through the bas...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274760383387 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.14696485623 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0958466453674 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0415335463259 0.0501214627716 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0255591054313 0.0437548338989 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102236421725 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0287539936102 0.0403226058552 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73006214308 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0447284345048 0.0326793684256 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11821086262 0.0861772015684 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00319488817891 0.021408717616 15% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0159744408946 0.011925033212 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1752.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06228373702 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339100346021 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283737024221 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207612456747 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138408304498 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73006214308 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546712802768 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 55.9598158865 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0555555556 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3603606839 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.814263465372 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 44.4292579777 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.89552238806 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297907981857 0.332605444948 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113373495005 0.102741220458 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0568751157023 0.0668466124924 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.609919725912 0.534860350844 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159110719577 0.148594505496 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128273040639 0.134430193775 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523261739937 0.0742795772207 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.405595685171 0.324371583561 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0380799267854 0.0638462369009 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196700389314 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334896326676 0.058150111329 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.