Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays TV has become an important part of our life and it acts as a medium to spread news and awareness and for some people, it acts as a friend. I strongly agree with the statement that television helps broadcasting news and act as a companion to few people. This essay will discuss the reasons why TV is helping in the news and as a friend.
There are several reasons why I promulgate the idea that TV is helping in the broadcast the news. Firstly, TV shows the news to people from all over the world even if it occurs in a remote place of the world. We are not aware of some of the places in the world, but television has the ability to bring the news to our home. For example, during the last Olympic games, TV played a vital role in broadcasting the event all over the world.
Moreover, TV act as a companion to few people though they are old. The old generation who often do not have friends consider television as their friend and they watch all the entertainment programs and cultural events on the television.
To conclude, TV has increasingly become an essential part of our life and helps to share the new across the world and acts a friend to some people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...roadcasting news and act as a companion to few people. This essay will discuss the...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...place of the world. We are not aware of some of the places in the world, but television has...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (TV) must be used with a third-person verb: 'acts'.
Suggestion: acts
...ent all over the world. Moreover, TV act as a companion to few people though the...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...rld. Moreover, TV act as a companion to few people though they are old. The old...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38356164384 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49046470799 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511415525114 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6851814884 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33926730297 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145464053834 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144319096316 0.071462118173 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216409611896 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137065700091 0.0609392437508 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 53.1260098522 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.5310837438 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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