The world has been shortened to our hands when mobiles become popular. As a result, online shopping had become an important part of human life.
Because of many advantages, people has chosen online application while they purchase anything rather than going to a local shop. Main advantages of online shopping is that we can compare, review, criticize our products before buy. Also, it becomes economical to buy products from online shopping because of competition.
Furthermore, there are debates pointing that the online shopping causes a deceleration of business to the local shops. There are more advantages while shopping from internet, also there are many disadvantages. We couldn't feel the real shopping experience when we purchase things from internet.
However, shops can earn more profit with their unique products. They can work together as a cluster to become a shopping destination like, flee markets in Asia. Consequently, this will give an additional advantage for the customers to pick wide variety of items coming to a single place.
In conclusion, we could say that there are still abundant chances for local suppliers over internet shopping even though, fierce competitions are there.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...arkets in Asia. Consequently, this will gave an additional advantage for the custome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 1207.87684729 73% => OK
No of words: 168.0 242.827586207 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2619047619 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71010538574 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696428571429 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 379.143842365 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8534330409 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267711830849 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105554728355 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586541704071 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141542277835 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677388957887 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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