Parents be legally responsible for action on their children life? for studies, experience...
Nowadays, it has become a colossal trend to see that Parents be legally responsible for action on their children life. There are myraids of reasons for this topic. However, parents have to take some action on their childrens study and experience areas. In this essay, I shall further collobrate both the sides which would plausible conclusions.
At the outset, there a deluge of arguments on both sides I will be explain in this essay. Furthermore, parents should take action on their childrens behaviour and regarding studies so they can connect with them. Some rights for parents is they can talk with their child about there full day work or how day going. Let's take one example, in one family their child study in college he can go daily college one day his father show that him child drink alcohol and cigaret so after that his father tell him what is this. So that his children don't take it serious.
So, above mentioned example says that parents should have to take more responsibility for their childrens. That actions make here life safe and affordable.Some people have not better experience for their life and also in job so do not worry about that better study make people better experience.
To recapitulate, from above mentioned arguments one can conclude that childrens also have to take some responsibilities for their better life so they can set their life in further better and experience make people well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92975206612 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55115346268 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52479338843 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1414846856 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390426424977 0.242375264174 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164248006121 0.0925447433944 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145373206656 0.071462118173 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275126738652 0.151781067708 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107549827395 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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