During the past few decades, a controversial debate has been raising regarding the responsibility of the parents associated with their children acts. The issue has grown in importance in the light of recent events where divergent allegations have been made. In this essay, I will examine the arguments regarding this issue and its implications.
The juvenile delinquency has been increasing sharply over the time. This has raised many questions regarding the potential accountability of the parents and how this can help to prevent the crime rates to rise. The proposal of imposing penalties and even convictions suggests that with this type of sanctions, the parents will do everything in order to avoid wrongdoings from their children. This is exemplified by the results obtained in the state of Texas, where this approach was tried. As a result, it was determined that exists a direct correlation between parents penalties and juvenile crimes.
Another situation that needs to be addressed and analyzed is the relationship that the kids have with their parents. It is necessary to highlight the importance of the connection that kids have with their relatives in order to identify the potential difficulties. Even in the situation that parents suffer the consequences of their children behaviour, if the relationship between them is weak, that will not prevent the teenager from juvenile offending.
In summary, it was argued the implications of taken action against the parents for their children act reaching the conclusion that it is absolutely necessary to hold the parents liable for the children transgression
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
... act reaching the conclusion that it is absolutely necessary to hold the parents liable for the chil...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... liable for the children transgression
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99868996131 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521568627451 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.744070414 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204384106451 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725719941514 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726526681542 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133090927831 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405195851332 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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