People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life .What are the advantages and disadvantages for living in urban areas and rural areas.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in urban areas people moving rural areas. There is a wide spread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this easy.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one in that people are moving to rural areas can not only contribute to better life to rural areas. But also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. As a case in point urban areas provide better employment, business opportunities, medical facilities, better life standard of living. Thanks to wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much case efficacy and convenience needless to say all these merits stand one is good stead , as for argument their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of rural areas. The primary one steams from the fact that by observing the afire mentioned trend. People not only realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its magnitude of its repercussions. When it comes to today’s ever changing lifestyles. Beside it impact on is five reaching indeed, hence, it is apartment why many are against.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits and drawbacks of are indeed to great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91760299625 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68941339695 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558052434457 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3766954479 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260893436889 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819561518031 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125853558381 0.071462118173 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128872784552 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103453383834 0.0609392437508 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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