People pursue dangerous activities like skydiving, motorcycle sports, water river rafting etc. Do you support? if yes, why and if no, why?
In has long been a subject of discussion whether dangerous activities should be pursued or not. In my opinion, the former notion has several strong elements that deserve attention and I will explain why using pertinent arguments.
My viewpoint has a myriad of arguments. The most perceptible one, to start with, lies in the fact that majority of opinions are based on unbiased figures obtained from global and local sources. Not only does it reveal some astonishing figures that prove the point of pursuing these activities but also encourages one to consider more details further down the track, which gives a transparent and logical reasoning to the people of today's world about activities like skydiving, motorcycle sports and water river rafting. Self-evidently, all these viewpoints stand in good stead, as far as people welfare is concerned.
Another vital fact of the arguments is that, based on some real-time facts and figures,people are taking crucial decisions after considering all the merits and demerits. Besides a few shortcomings, it is up to the authorities to educate the people and allow them to take a sensible decision. Therefore, it is quite evident that why many are in favour of my viewpoint.
From what has been discussed, one can conclude that the benefits of the these dangerous activities as mentioned above are too great to ignore.
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| 2018-12-19 | Muhammad Khaleeq | 77 | view |
| 2018-12-19 | Muhammad Khaleeq | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, therefore, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17117117117 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86242742931 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657657657658 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3250298329 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193131873515 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05959744656 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549768901399 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09862225917 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346749955592 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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