In this the and day, the key role of success has become an ongoing long-running dispute among people all around the world. Many social activists believe that the place where people grow up plays a pivotal role to get accomplishment. while opponents have an opse view, so I highly believe that many other factors have more powerful effects on gaining successful.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I support that a neighborhood where people born and grow up has not important effect to gain accomplishments. First and foremost is that the more hard-working and perseverance are the key factors for going up the ladder of the successful. Secondly, the way of upbringing the children is very important, so parents play an important role to help offsprings to be successful. Thus, the place of people grown up is not very important.
On the other hand, there are several examples to mention that many elites have born and grow up in the good neighboorhood. for example, my cousin was born in Australi and know he was a very famous lawyer whereas I was born in Iran and I am not successful and satisfy of my life. The places were people born can pave the way to put children in an appropriate way to do not waste their time and just focused on their goals.
In conclusion, although there are several reasons that I mentioned above that places where people born and grown-up play a pivotal role, In my opinion, other factors are much more important to got accomplishment.
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- As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support you 85
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- law can change human behaviour. do you agree or not? 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Suggestion: For
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e born can pave the way to put children in an appropriate way to do not waste their time and just foc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75968992248 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78337756577 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507751937984 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5374322498 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.636363636 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.25397266985 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223329497702 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977167037725 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669797234909 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149720186428 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355268444581 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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