Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.'
To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experienc
Nowadays, the type of jobs which suitable for men or women has become a long-running despute among public all around the world, which leads to a moot question " what sort of employement is suitable for men or women?". It is a widely held the view that hard jobs are more suitable for men and dest jobs for women. Thes essay will measure this object on both sides.
To begin with, there are several reasons that I believe hard jobs and less emotional tasks are appropriate for men. First and foremost is that, in terms of charachters men have more stronger muscles and less sensitive emotions which help them to work in hard conditions such as working under a see or building a house. In addition there is little room doubt that men have better economical creativity to invest their money in order to make better profit for their families. thus, men are recommended to more physical jobs.
Howevere, needless to say, wemon have better communicative skills to make a relationship with others in new places. Furtheremore, women have emotional and mathernal nature to nurture children at schools to become better people in near future. For example, a group of reputable social scientists, working in a prestigious university conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between succesful students who their teachers were women at schools. The result was statistically significance and revealed that those their teachers were men three time less be succesful in their careers. Hence women are created for educational professions.
To recapiculate, although there are several sentiments on both sides, I firemly believe that women and men are recomended to do some kinds of jab that they are success on it , and governments provide better situation for individuals to find suitable jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ch suitable for men or women has become a long-running despute among public all around the wor...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
... that, in terms of charachters men have more stronger muscles and less sensitive emotions whi...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ing under a see or building a house. In addition there is little room doubt that men hav...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
... make better profit for their families. thus, men are recommended to more physical j...
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Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ime less be succesful in their careers. Hence women are created for educational profe...
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...kinds of jab that they are success on it , and governments provide better situatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13851351351 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85099108886 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3138019205 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275310819952 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943454232666 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737637251271 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160094175348 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803133421079 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.