Nowadays, the type of jobs which suitable for men or women has become a long-running dispute among public all around the world, which leads to a moot question " what sort of employment is suitable for men or women?". It is a widely held the view that hard jobs are more suitable for men and dest jobs for women. Thes essay will measure this object on both sides.
To begin with, there are several reasons that I believe hard jobs and less emotional tasks are appropriate for men. First and foremost is that in terms of characters men have stronger muscles and less sensitive emotions which help them to work in hard conditions such as working under a see or building a house. In addition there is little room doubt that men have better economical creativity to invest their money in order to make better profit for their families. thus, men are recommended for more physical jobs.
However, needless to say, women have better communicative skills to make a relationship with others in new places. Furthermore, women have emotional and maternal nature to nurture children at schools to become better people in near future. For example, a group of reputable social scientists, working in a prestigious university conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between successful students who their teachers were women at schools. The result was statistically significant and revealed that those their teachers were men three times less be successful in their careers. Hence women are created for educational professions.
To recapitulate, although there are several sentiments on both sides, I firmly believe that women and men are recommended to do some kinds of jab that they are a success on it, and governments provide a better situation for individuals to find suitable jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09764309764 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83186801787 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1789978452 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273368365033 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098550189998 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077606399316 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161187132127 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792110205426 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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