Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, the constructive dialogue on education and distance learning can lead to a thought-provoking discussion. My view is that I believe the normal education process will remain the only effective way of education especially for children as, and I shall put my forth in this essay.
To commence with, school is not only for scientific education but also for personal development, and, It is also important to note that children are under restricted plan to develop their skills in languages in a proper manner with respect to their age.
On the other hand, using internet without a higher supervision like parents supervision or teachers supervision will lead to unpleasant exposer for the kids to violence and adultery content which is not appropriate for their age , It is vital to observe that while school is applying a certain level of education for each age, the internet is having no limits what a child can see and learn .
In conclusion, I see equally potential evidence that supports the arguments I have provided above, and hence I believe that school will remain the only way for child education because to control and develop safely child progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, the constructiv...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...an to develop their skills in languages in a proper manner with respect to their age. On the ot...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents supervision or teachers supervision will lead to unpleasant exposer for the ...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t which is not appropriate for their age , It is vital to observe that while schoo...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...no limits what a child can see and learn . In conclusion, I see equally potenti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, in conclusion, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11274509804 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89374546961 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.5024630542 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1489734614 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 208.6 104.977214359 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.8 20.9669160288 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4 7.25397266985 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883316964796 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457673014729 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259427424752 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517173751522 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251293188552 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 12.6369458128 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 53.1260098522 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.3980295567 173% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.5123152709 219% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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