Should parents be held legally responsible for the actions of their children? what is your opinion?
Surely, there has been no time in history,where the lives of people has changed more daramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals parents be held legally responsible for the actions of their children has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion people have always inligued to analyze and explain important of people constrate on their child activities.I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with,parents are first teacher of their children so they are responsible for what their child do either its right or wrong. Also,babies spend most of the time with their parents, so its duty of parents to do right things in front of babies, because they immedeatly catch them. Moreover, parents teach moral values,social skills and many more to children. they teach their juniors how to communicate with others, and who to respect their elders.
Probing ahead,there are some others arguments of my view point.Firstly,children in their early age learn many lessons of life from parents.In their developing age parents have a greater role to play. they should aware their children about everything good or bad, about their culture,moral duty etc. parents should not use abusive language in the house, they should not do the activities which effect their babies.In their growing age, children adapt what they see.
To conclude, parents should give more time to their childrenand focus on their every activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2974137931 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93536381583 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4362989263 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370546613391 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141313112202 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822192843354 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212522022171 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235970231162 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.