should voting be compulsory for all citizens or people should have freedom to choose not to vote. What is your opinion?
A matter of considerable controversy at present is the voting can be mandatory for each single person living in country or they can choose whether they can vote or not. we will discuss both sides, whether voting is necessary for each individual or can be done as per their own choice.
To begin with, the right of voting is birth right in some countries and some countries are not willing to give rights to vote their people instead they are wounded in traditional methods, where leader is chosen by specific family and he/she will rule the entire country, which often lead to vanishes of particular state. Democracy is new era in these days and often chose by people except some parts, which they are choosing the traditional methods. I would like given an example here is in the United Kingdom the Queen is selected by particular family and it is still their people enjoying the same, however; in India the leader is chosen from voting of each individuals vote.
considering the latest democratic countries and their progress towards the usefulness and literatures, which we have to choose these methods to have better results with great expansion. there are multiple state and regions have grown superior then the before traditional era. In modern days many more to introduce in democratic which is necessary for world's growth and especially for their personnel growth.
In conclusion, considering the both side we can conclude that, compare to traditional method the democratic method is always good and public have their right in safe side if the chosen wrong person in voting they can change same with superiors. there is always scope for improvement, hence, as of now it is best way to improve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
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...pe for improvement, hence, as of now it is best way to improve it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, still, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95155709343 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5345070072 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546712802768 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7938716048 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.1 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196998741829 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812130801304 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385152282764 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118927124875 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401026157028 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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