In some countries, the birth rate is slowing, the problem of an aging population, what is the cause and effects of this issue all over the world. How to solve this problem?
One of the most conspicuous trend of today’s is a world is colossal upsurge in some countries, the birth rate is slowing, the problem of an aging population, what is the cause and effects of this issue all over the world. There is a wide range of factors that account for way this is happening. In my opinion, this problem can be remedied provided that some effective measures are taken. There are myriads of reasons accountable for soaring concern. Unlike every day problem, which can be dealt with easily in some countries the birth rate is slowing, which is extremely perilous can lead to an array of such issues as the problem of an aging population and is the cause and effects of this issue all over the world. Thanks to the aforementioned predicaments, it is not only people, but also society which can suffer immensely. Steps to deal with problem are many, but the most effective one are in fact not remote or complicated, but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the fact that by ensuring the implementation of set rules and policies, government and local authorities should take the necessary initiatives cumulatively. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, can we expect to see some considerable progress in curbing the issue. To conclude, dealing with in some countries, the birth rate is slowing, the problem of an aging population is one of the most prevalent problems that faces almost all parts of the world today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps as discussed above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, nevertheless, so, then, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96043165468 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80953674356 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532374100719 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3019677425 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485954244331 0.242375264174 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153896257486 0.0925447433944 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180255149024 0.071462118173 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.485954244331 0.151781067708 320% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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