some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.to what extent do you agree with view?
In modern world, Advertisement has become part of human life which encountered on every place throughout daily life. It is believed that advertisements are using unethical and unacceptable methods to promote products. This contentious topic has been profoundly debated in several forums. I agree with view that nowadays advertisements are inclining towards unethical methods. I will reason my stance meticulously before implicating a rational conclusion.
Throwing weight behind my view, Advertisement industry is trying different methods to attract consumers. An Advertisement is quite common which will contain a tag line to influence politically or promoting unethical behavior. Moreover, most of the advertisements use false reports or surveys to claim effectiveness of product or service. To illustrate, Investment related advertisement always shows services attractive but not explain that comes with some hidden terms and conditions.
Juxtaposed to my view, there are people who holds opinion that advertisements are according to current demand of business as society has changed in recent time as a result old method of advertisements are no working anymore. A celebrity can help to increasing consumption despite the quality or effectiveness of any product. Advertisement sole purpose is to attract people towards product or service so it should use all methods those make a product more sell-able.
To reiterate, I strongly believe that it is true that due to too much of competition advertisements are using unethical and unacceptable methods.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72413793103 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36286462734 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3578602608 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277113441401 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100133191826 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871231716944 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170278286936 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379597279992 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 53.1260098522 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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