These days the issue of gender equality has become a matter of considerable controversy. Despite the widely supported opinion that both sexes should be considered equal in all areas of life including work, many people believe that males and females have differences which determine inappropriate lines of work for the latter. This essay will prove that due to vital biological and psychological distinctions the doors to some occupations are fairly closed for women.
To begin with, some professions require physical strength and stamina. In general, there is no doubt that men are usually stronger and more athletic than women. Therefore, their physique makes them preferred for certain jobs, for instance, roofers, minors or steel workers. For these reasons, some jobs which claim more physical power are male-dominated. Of course, this does not mean a total absence of women employees in those areas. But it is clear that if you are woman and desire to gain success there you should be ready to prove appropriate capabilities.
In addition, some occupations demand, on a contrary, feminine traits such as consideration and emotional approach possessed by ladies. Generally, they have a social conscience which helps them communicate more easily with others. Consequently, females are more suitable for occupations such as teachers, social workers and psychologists. But again, there are also men in these professions but ladies outnumber them. For these reasons, some jobs are usually defined as more proper for women.
To summarize, the sexes are deemed completely equal in a professional aspect by many. However, others tend to believe that particular jobs are rather suitable for men than for women and vice versa. I firmly believe that anatomical and mental specifics of males and females indeed affect their choice of occupations.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in general, no doubt, of course, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39446366782 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85036269167 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.408026122 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7058823529 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344229728595 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947856408268 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801567712546 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206550862841 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301947354571 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in general, no doubt, of course, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39446366782 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85036269167 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.408026122 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7058823529 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344229728595 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947856408268 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801567712546 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206550862841 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301947354571 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.