Some people prefer to play team sports, while other prefer to play individual sports. Discuss the advantages of each. Than indicate which you prefer and why?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that individual and team sports has been one of the most prominent topics of contemporary discussion. In this essay i will discuss some key features of both the games and give my own view in my further crumb of writing.
To begin with, there are ample of benifits of playing iindividual games. One of the major benifit is that you do not have to depend on the preformence of other team players. Sometimes it is difficulte to make balance with other team mates.
On the flip side, in the team sports a sportsmen can learn some new skills. To cite an example, they can develop their displaine and learn the values of team sprit. Moreover there is less burden on a individual in a team and they can enjoy the leasure time with each other.Thus, this is helpful in their games.
To sum up, i firmly believe that, undoubtedly, there are number of advantages of play alone. However, there are plethora of benifits of play in team which are unavoidable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 1207.87684729 75% => OK
No of words: 196.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62244897959 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57367491775 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3131177417 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197172108935 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721809608699 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370114979852 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114779856406 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380363199837 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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