Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine. Write an essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best for the tourist and local community.
The inundation of tourists towards developed as well as countryside has resulted in exponential growth of tourism. Some people think that it’s better to visit sorted out places with abundance of resources, while others maintain that travelling across the country is more beneficial. This essay will discuss that why the later overweighs the former.
Firstly, tourism across the complete country has numerous positive aspects. It allows the tourists to visit new places and meet new people and come across various cultures and traditions. As an example, a tourist visiting a country side will meet people of different dialects and cultures. This will not only allow the tourist to learn new things but also broaden up his horizon and vision. Resultantly, visiting country places to meet people from different cultural backgrounds can prove to be far more constructive.
On the other hand, a group of people advocate that its always better to visit well-structured places with streamlined resources instead of foreign or country side travel. As tourists will face no hindrance to communicate and understand the local cultures and traditions. However, there is another flip side of the coin which entails that the true purpose of tourism would fade out, if the tourism is limited to local community. Therefore, tourism limited to native area will diminish the real gist of tourism.
To conclude, I opine that based on aforementioned facts it’s easier to say that the foreign and country side tourism outweighs the local tourism as it would bear more fruitful results and broaden up the horizon and vision of tourists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72539015176 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7417682529 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111298705463 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440495063201 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049054555065 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711142972926 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028366384978 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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