Books are a great source of knowledge and information. However, some people believe that nowadays the importance books are decreasing. I completely agree with this view, the reasons for which will be enumerated in this essay.
Firstly, thanks to the advent of state of state of the art technologies such as mobile phones, information is now available at the click of a button. Nowadays, every person around the globe has a mobile phone with them and this allow them to access information and entertainment very easily. If people need to read or watch something, they only have to surf through the Internet, and this is more convenient than using a book. For example, a recent study found out that majority of people around the world find it more easy to read an article through the Internet than through a magazine or a book.
Secondly, it is also a fact that nowadays people don't have to spend a huge amount of money on books when they can easily get all the information they need from online, free of cost. For instance, today if we need any information on a particular topic we only have to Google it and it is available for free. Thus people tend to search online rather than spending money on books which are often expensive. Also, finding an information on a books takes a lot of time, but from the Internet this is possible at the fraction of a second.
In conclusion, although books are a great source of information and entertainment, they are losing their popularity because of the advent of technologies which are more faster and more convenient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of state'.
Suggestion: of state
...essay. Firstly, thanks to the advent of state of state of the art technologies such as mobile ...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...rstly, thanks to the advent of state of state of the art technologies such as mobile phones, inf...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... it is also a fact that nowadays people dont have to spend a huge amount of money on...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a book' or simply 'books'?
Suggestion: a book; books
...ensive. Also, finding an information on a books takes a lot of time, but from the Inter...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...of the advent of technologies which are more faster and more convenient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73992673993 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69293307132 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1145925703 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234342369869 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887470867456 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463561847502 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145991767924 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293007964331 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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