There is an opinion held by a section of the society that media should be given the permission to publish information about people's personal lives, while others hold the view that, they should be stopped from such activities. This essay will evaluate both the views before arriving at more logical conclusion.
On the one hand, supporters of the prior viewpoint believes that by publishing informations about the personal lives of people in media will allow the public to absorb certain useful conventions and codes of conduct for their lives. They believe that through this certain issues that persist in the society can be ameliorated, when the public accepts other people as their role models. For example, if media publish about the struggles behind the success of a celebrity, it will motivate the public to work hard and achieve their goals. Furthermore, it will allow the public to identify the individuals who pose dangerous threats to the society.
On the other hand, some people belive that this should be controlled. This, in their opinion, is because every person in the world has the right to enjoy his/her her private life. They believe that Publicising private lives of people is the violation of basic human rights. Nowadays, most people are already struggling with their social lives, so invading people's personal lives will only make the problems worse for them. For instance, the famous actor Harry Williams committed suicide when the media published fake news about him and his personal life. So if the media is given the full freedom to write whatever they want, it will have neagive impacts on the society.
In conclusion, there is a debate among many people that news coverage for a promoting purposes is necessary or it should be controlled. The essay discussed the both views of publishing private details and why it is mandatory to control it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04180064309 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47754986359 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2674677439 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331748873371 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116522033641 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815924527097 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220242448178 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677552006337 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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