Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while other’s think it should be controlled ? Discuss both views.
In this contemporary society, media such as newspapers, magazines, radio and TV channels are source of sharing latest news in a fast and convenient way. However, certain demographics of the society argue that media should have limited authority to publish one's personal life. This essay will analyze both viewpoints conclusively with examples.
Firstly, media is a great medium to confront facts and figures, especially when these facts are associated with the misuse of political power, corruption and misleading the nation. Political leaders often found to be guilty for their involvement in bribery cases and earning money by using unfair means. Therefore, It is important to confront these political leaders' personal life by sharing their property details, suspicious visits to spread awareness among common man. Jaylalitha, the former chief minster of Tamil Naidu state of India, has been questioned several times by media regarding her enormous property and found guilty later when probed by Central Bureau Of India.
On the flip side, It is right to say that media should not interfere in one's personal life by pressing every tiny detail of one's life. For instance, it has been often seen that media tend to publicize the life events such as weddings of celebrities, their children's pictures. This publicity is being disliked and objected by the celebrities most of the time and they demand privacy in these matters. By considering all these concerns, Deepika and Ranveer, the Indian actors installed strict security measures in their wedding as couple did not want media to breach their privacy.
By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that though media is en efficient source to be up to the date in this competitive world, but keeping certain control on published data is necessary provided it has no concern with the illegal matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61892895835 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1487510594 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.583333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137285272254 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503612994759 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045450716596 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833342908794 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299674486374 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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